Rough edit feedback-Foundation portfolio

Feedback;

•  Hold title a little longer across the screen ( the stalker title ).
• Verisimilitude - Randomness of standing and looking at the trees.
• Add music in to create more suspense. 
• Get an actual danger in the film and things that make our film seem more off, creepy and suspenseful.

Response;

• We are going to get pickup shots to complete the story.
• When we have all our shots and are  editing again I will find more music.
• We will also make the story more real and her situation more common, for example she will. probably be going on more of a walk rather than just looking at trees.