Rough edit feedback-Foundation portfolio
Feedback; Hold title a little longer across the screen ( the stalker title ). Verisimilitude - Randomness of standing and looking at the trees. Add music in to create more suspense. Get an actual danger in the film and things that make our film seem more off, creepy and suspenseful. Response; We are going to get pickup shots to complete the story. When we have all our shots and are editing again I will find more music. We will also make the story more real and her situation more common, for example she will. probably be going on more of a walk rather than just looking at trees.